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Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Sat May 26, 2012 9:10 pm

The Fire Stirring Ruby wrote:Actually, I pretty much think that it is a crappy story, and it is the very first (considering that I dislike the other one that I deleted on dA) fanfic that I really ever had written. It still has considerable number of flaws going around there, and rewriting/revision is what it really needs.

This is subjective of me to say, but staying true to character is all I could ever ask for in any story. Straying too far from that only makes it feel like a completely different series. Recall all those fanfics a former member use to write often? The ones that contained nothing but smut between Natsuki and a random Mai-Series character of the day? You could put any character from any series in those roles and it wouldn't make a different. Be diverse with your borrowed characters and storytelling, Ruby.

Just remember where they came from.

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Mon May 28, 2012 4:53 am

M.I.Y.U. Greer wrote:This is subjective of me to say, but staying true to character is all I could ever ask for in any story. Straying too far from that only makes it feel like a completely different series. Recall all those fanfics a former member use to write often? The ones that contained nothing but smut between Natsuki and a random Mai-Series character of the day? You could put any character from any series in those roles and it wouldn't make a different. Be diverse with your borrowed characters and storytelling, Ruby.

Just remember where they came from.

I see... All I could ever ask is a helpful critique coming from anybody. That is very helpful advice, Luu-sama. Thank you!

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:07 pm

Since I haven't had any updates since last year (wow), I might want to share new (and a not-so-new) fanfics.

Black Rock Shooter

Hunger Games

CRITIQUE IS WELCOME! >:3

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Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Tue Mar 05, 2013 1:38 pm

I've yet to see Black Rock Shooter (a series every Madoka fan recommended to me. Gee, I wonder why...) so I'll pass on that one. O_O I'm interested in the Hunger Games fic though! *reads*

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Mon Mar 11, 2013 12:06 am

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:I've yet to see Black Rock Shooter (a series every Madoka fan recommended to me. Gee, I wonder why...) so I'll pass on that one. O_O I'm interested in the Hunger Games fic though! *reads*

Yes, BRS (Black Rock Shooter) is good (considering every character there is female). >.<


Hunger Games, huh? What do you think about the fanfic, Luu?

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Re: Ruby's stuff, I guess [Requests are closed.]

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Tue Mar 19, 2013 1:31 pm

The Fire Stirring Ruby wrote:
Hunger Games, huh? What do you think about the fanfic, Luu?

Depressing. Although it does serve well as an alternate ending to what was already established in the book (I'm so excited for the film version later this year), however, even Katniss is too good for a premature death. However, the positive thing I will offer your fic is that Katniss is human. More human than most fictional female protagonists in the 2010s and humans are fragile. She isn't invincible and if she were given one dying wish, it would definitely be telling Peeta how she feels. Katniss has difficulty expressing herself (except for little Primrose), so it was a touching end for the great warrior.

It's an alternate universe, so I shouldn't get too behind on her death. It's possible of course, her unfortunate injury from Mockingjay is a huge example of knocking on death's door. I just think she's not that easy to get rid of. Katniss is a survivor, a symbol of hope for everyone. When she dies, hope dies with her. Realistic AU one shot, emotional at that. Just not the way I expected her character to go out. Giving your one-shot three Mockingjay pins out of five.

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Thu Mar 21, 2013 8:46 pm

I have decided to stop creating signatures (as I don't have too much time on Photoshop now, I've gotten rusty).

But, fret not my friends. There is something brewing within my computer.

That is the power of userbars. I haven't seen any userbars here on the forum (probably the only ones were Deppy's).

To those who don't know userbars:
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userbars are image links, meaning you can click on the image. The image will redirect you to another thread, or site you want.

As you see, I tried to make one (you can see it on my signature).
Please don't click on the image though. It will lead you to a fancase I'm making. I'm revamping it too at the moment, as soon as I get the correct characters in...

Requests are open.

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Re: Ruby's stuff, I guess [Requests are closed.]

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Thu Mar 21, 2013 11:44 pm

The Fire Stirring Ruby wrote:I have decided to stop creating signatures (as I don't have too much time on Photoshop now, I've gotten rusty).

But, fret not my friends. There is something brewing within my computer.

That is the power of userbars. I haven't seen any userbars here on the forum (probably the only ones were Deppy's).

To those who don't know userbars:
Spoiler:
userbars are image links, meaning you can click on the image. The image will redirect you to another thread, or site you want.

As you see, I tried to make one (you can see it on my signature).
Please don't click on the image though. It will lead you to a fancase I'm making. I'm revamping it too at the moment, as soon as I get the correct characters in...

Requests are open.

Userbar commissions, huh? This is a golden opportunity! Deppy never did consider making me a Team Miss Maria userbar for me. I'd like to request a user bar of Miss Maria and one of Galaxia from Sailor Moon. If you agree, we can move to the next step.

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Sat Mar 23, 2013 8:43 am

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:I'd like to request a user bar of Miss Maria and one of Galaxia from Sailor Moon. If you agree, we can move to the next step.

Sure. Just PM me the details. I'm just getting started with this thing though.


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Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Sat Mar 23, 2013 2:21 pm

The Fire Stirring Ruby wrote:
Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:I'd like to request a user bar of Miss Maria and one of Galaxia from Sailor Moon. If you agree, we can move to the next step.

Sure. Just PM me the details. I'm just getting started with this thing though.


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My fail attempts. My voice isn't recorded in the highest quality though.

Female, high pitched.
Objection!
Hold it!
Take that!
Gotcha!

No problem. :) I'll send you images of Galaxia tonight. Check our gallery section for Miss Maria pics.



^ Or this particular image if the others don't inspire you. ;p As for your sound bytes, I enjoyed them! XD Your objection! is more cute than over-the-top.

Female, high pitched.

^ Hence that warning, eh? >:'3

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Sun Mar 24, 2013 1:40 am

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:Check our gallery section for Miss Maria pics.

I think you'll love this render though.


Render by Nezumi

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:As for your sound bytes, I enjoyed them! XD Your objection! is more cute than over-the-top.

Low quality recording, as someone told me. ((I'm really going to get a good microphone this time...))

But, yeah, thanks for that. >:3 highly appreciated.


Official/Opening Post re-vamped for your ease.
And my thread really looks silly before. >__>

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Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Sun Mar 24, 2013 12:38 pm

>:3 Well yeah, it was low quality. At least I could hear all the sound bytes clearly.

That is a nice render of Miss Maria! Since you're going with renders, it'll be more difficult to find one for Galaxia. I rarely see from Sailor Moon, unless it's one of the Sailor Senshi. None of the villains. ;_;

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Sun Mar 24, 2013 9:39 pm

If you can't find any renders, I'll try to make it as a render (though it would consume a lot of time). And check out my OP if you want to add anything else (say, bigger size?).

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Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Mon Mar 25, 2013 12:39 pm

The Fire Stirring Ruby wrote:If you can't find any renders, I'll try to make it as a render (though it would consume a lot of time). And check out my OP if you want to add anything else (say, bigger size?).

Scratch that then. I'll make a Galaxia render myself. :) Let's use another character for now. Juri Han (the best thing to come out of Korea since......ever) from Street Fighter IV:



I love her bikini. :'3

nao lick : It's very....me....ish.

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Thu Apr 04, 2013 6:12 pm

Featuring Miss Maria userbar (commission for Luu).


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Post by Midori Sugiura on Sun Apr 07, 2013 7:09 pm

bump
I want to be alerted at every update ^_^

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Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Sun Apr 07, 2013 11:06 pm

Midori Sugiura wrote: bump
I want to be alerted at every update ^_^

You should ask for a Team Midori banner, dude! You could use one! Philosodori

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Post by Midori Sugiura on Mon Apr 08, 2013 12:29 am

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:
Midori Sugiura wrote: bump
I want to be alerted at every update ^_^

You should ask for a Team Midori banner, dude! You could use one! Philosodori

Wait can I just request one? No payment or anything?

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:23 am

Midori Sugiura wrote:Wait can I just request one? No payment or anything?

No payments required. I don't ask anything... except for special requests.

Just request away. Team Midori banner? No prob. It'll be done in a jiffy.

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Post by Midori Sugiura on Mon Apr 08, 2013 9:17 am

The Fire Stirring Ruby wrote:
Midori Sugiura wrote:Wait can I just request one? No payment or anything?

No payments required. I don't ask anything... except for special requests.

Just request away. Team Midori banner? No prob. It'll be done in a jiffy.

Thanks Ruby Mikoto Minagi

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Mon Apr 08, 2013 9:38 am

The fact that there is little images of Midori (Aswad) on the net, it's saddening. It makes the work process longer, and it's supposed to be very quick. No, really. Edit: I'm making a Midori render myself, so wait a little bit longer (one week or less).

And because I feel like I'm being generous to Luu (since I haven't actually started your other commission), feel free to have a taste of these:



I'm really disappointed with the second one, though. Horrible editing on my part.

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Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:13 pm

Yeah and our Midori gallery hasn't reached Mai-Otome yet. I need to finish uploading the Mai-HiME portion first. If you need HQ shots of Aswad Midori or any character earlier, don't hesitate to ask.

Thanks for the userbars of Juri Han! The second one is a bit too cropped yeah. ) Good intentions, good intentions. Nao Yuuki

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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Tue Apr 09, 2013 1:55 am

Just to give a little update.

The render's officially on WIP status (confirmed last night, or morning... whatever). Get a glimpse on my progress:



I'd estimate my progress to be around 10% to 30%, since cleaning the pixels around would take a lot of time. But it's good right?

If anyone's going to ask, the sprite came from Mai-HiME: Unmei no Keitojou (correct me if I'm wrong).

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Post by Midori Sugiura on Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:43 pm

The Fire Stirring Ruby wrote:Just to give a little update.

The render's officially on WIP status (confirmed last night, or morning... whatever). Get a glimpse on my progress:



I'd estimate my progress to be around 10% to 30%, since cleaning the pixels around would take a lot of time. But it's good right?

If anyone's going to ask, the sprite came from Mai-HiME: Unmei no Keitojou (correct me if I'm wrong).

So Far, So beautiful Mikoto Minagi
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Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Mon Apr 15, 2013 4:33 am

Featuring Juri Han userbar:



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