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Maiden [story in progress]

Post by Hohoemu on Fri Jan 24, 2014 2:21 pm

Hi everyone! Lately I've had some inspiration to create a story based on the Mai Otome series.
It's far from being complete but I couldn't wait to share it with you guys so here it is!!
I hope you'll enjoy =)



The girl was pale with dark hair pulled back. She stood facing the creature, small and thin, as if waiting to be crushed under its enormous claws. Then suddenly she cried something and the beast roared. Circles of purple light appeared around her limbs, and her body was covered with a black and silver armor adorned with white gems.
She leapt aside to avoid the creature’s claws. Excited by the purple light turning faster and faster around the girl’s body, the beast attacked again. She dodged, then extended her arm and a black bow appeared in her palm. Notching a long and thin arrow, she aimed and shot right through the monster’s throat, then jumped over it and shot again at the back of its head. The creature growled and fell heavily on the rocky ground. The girl twirled around and landed gracefully on her knees while her shimmering armor disappeared. She got up on her feet with a sigh and lifted her hand before her face when the rising sun caught her eyes. The warm light on her face and the emotion of the fight made her feel dizzy. It was time to go home.
She turned towards the city, took a step. Then suddenly she was paralyzed. She tried to walk on but her legs wouldn’t move. Her chest felt heavy, she could hardly breathe. When she realized what was happening, time became slow, so deadly slow. In a split second she felt the cold sweat running down her face, the fear blurring her sight, she saw memories of long-gone years pass before her wide-open eyes as the creature’s tail crushed her body like a giant snake. In a split second…

Her eyes opened in the half-darkness. Her heart was throbbing painfully and she felt as cold as ice. She sat up, trying to rub the feeling from her mind but the bloody nightmare had chilled her to the bone. It was never easy, but this time it was different. This time she was inside. When her heart had finally calmed down, she got up and went to the window. It was still early but she knew some people were already busy outside her room. The day would be cold.
She dressed quickly and went out in search of something to drive the nightmare away. Servants were already at work here and there, some still yawning or disheveled. They greeted her, “Good morning Lady Orelle!” It felt good to hear her name after dreaming such a dream. Little by little she felt like herself again. She was Orelle Antarys, Warrior of the Dreamy Moonstone, bound by contract to Her Grace Vala Gyl Dh’Esper. The woman who had died on that tragic day wasn’t her.


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Re: Maiden [story in progress]

Post by ~Wakana~ on Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:20 pm

Ara, I didn't know you also write stories :)
I'm looking forward to reading the next part Wink

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Re: Maiden [story in progress]

Post by Hohoemu on Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:15 pm

I do pretty everything that involves creativity ^-^
Maybe I should translate this into french too...

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Re: Maiden [story in progress]

Post by Hohoemu on Thu Nov 06, 2014 4:01 pm

Hi guys!
I'm back after like 3 000 years, with only a few more lines for that story but I'm feeling inspired again so... I'll try to add more content soon, I promise ^-^

Oh, and here's a special one for Wakana : I've started a french translation.

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Re: Maiden [story in progress]

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Sat Nov 08, 2014 1:04 am

Hohoemu wrote:Hi guys!
I'm back after like 3 000 years, with only a few more lines for that story but I'm feeling inspired again so... I'll try to add more content soon, I promise ^-^

Oh, and here's a special one for Wakana : I've started a french translation.

Longer than that! Haha! Glad to see you be inspired again, you're actually a good author. Update it so I can review it properly. :3

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