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Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Syralind on Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:24 am

Hello all!

So I've started a new fic and I feel a bit rusty. Would anybody mind reviewing my chapter? Help a girl out?? :D

Thank you!!

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Mon Feb 25, 2013 11:49 am

Syralind wrote:Hello all!

So I've started a new fic and I feel a bit rusty. Would anybody mind reviewing my chapter? Help a girl out?? :D

Thank you!!

Congratulations on entering the fanfiction business. Wink I wouldn't mind taking a look at your story!

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Syralind on Mon Feb 25, 2013 1:20 pm

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:
Syralind wrote:Hello all!

So I've started a new fic and I feel a bit rusty. Would anybody mind reviewing my chapter? Help a girl out?? :D

Thank you!!

Congratulations on entering the fanfiction business. Wink I wouldn't mind taking a look at your story!

Ok. Thank you! :) How shall I send it?

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:34 pm

Syralind wrote:
Ok. Thank you! :) How shall I send it?

:) Through my PM is good. If it's too large, PM me for my e-mail address.

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by The Fire Stirring Ruby on Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:37 pm

I'd love to beta-read it. :D

I haven't had any new stories/chapters in my FF account, so this would be a nice change.

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by IlliterateKoi on Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:16 pm

You're writing a new story? Awesome! : D

Since people have already offered to beta for you, I'll be content to just wait for it to be done. Make sure you let us know when it's been posted! :3


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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:34 pm

Just got your email with Chapter 1: "Eye for an Eye". I'll take a look at it tonight and give you my thoughts soon. Once I'm done, mind if I pass it around to Ruby and Koi? They deserve a reward for their curiosity and willingness to participate. Shizuru Fujino

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Syralind on Mon Mar 04, 2013 5:17 pm

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:Just got your email with Chapter 1: "Eye for an Eye". I'll take a look at it tonight and give you my thoughts soon. Once I'm done, mind if I pass it around to Ruby and Koi? They deserve a reward for their curiosity and willingness to participate. Shizuru Fujino

I entirely agree :) I'm just sending a copy to Ruby but you're welcome to send one to Koi ^^

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Tue Mar 05, 2013 12:34 am

Thanks, Syralind. I will sent a copy to Koi right now. Arika Yumemiya

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by IlliterateKoi on Tue Mar 05, 2013 11:41 am

Thanks! Just got it now (good thing I checked my junk mail...), I'll give it a read and share my thoughts :3

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Tue Mar 05, 2013 1:36 pm

IlliterateKoi wrote:Thanks! Just got it now (good thing I checked my junk mail...), I'll give it a read and share my thoughts :3

:'3 Do you receive emails often?

Anyway, I'll probably have my thoughts up later tonight. Reading it for the second time, just in case I missed anything.

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Re: Looking for Beta Readers for New Story!

Post by Syralind on Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:30 pm

Great! Thank you both. :) :)

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