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Strawberry Panic: Bikini Time (oneshot)

Post by SulliMike23 on Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:45 pm

Bikini Time


A/N: This is my first Strawberry Panic fanfic. It's a short vingette for a contest for this Strawberry Panic club on Deviantart. It's only 400 words long and I hope you guys like it.

Disclaimer: I do not own Strawberry Panic.
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Nagisa couldn’t help but stare at her girlfriend. She knew Shizuma would look beautiful in anything she wore, but to see her in her two-piece black bikini and a towel wrapped around her waist took her breath away. The bathing suit alone showed off her well-defined body really well, the towel only enhanced it. Her hair was in its signature ponytail and she was wearing a pair of white Ray-Ban sunglasses. Shizuma’s entire appearance was stunning; not to mention very sexy in Nagisa’s eyes.

Shizuma’s lips curved into a teasing smile before she lowered her sunglasses below her eyes slightly, which twinkled with mischief, and said in a slight laugh, “Do you see something you like, Nagisa-chan?”

Shizuma winked to Nagisa, causing the younger girl to blush until her face resembled that of a cherry.

“W-w-well I...” Nagisa stammered, at a complete loss of words, making the older girl laugh again.

Shizuma, for her part, couldn’t help but stare at her precious Nagisa-chan. Like her, she too wore a two-piece bikini that showed off her body; except hers was a red and white striped tie-on bikini. While Nagisa’s hair had grown a little over the years, she still wore it in a bun that she remembered seeing her with on the day they first met. Shizuma just could not help but smile at how cute she looked.

“You know you can say it out loud,” Shizuma said, lifting Nagisa’s chin with her right finger, “We are a couple, are we not?”

Nagisa snapped out of her daydreaming and smiled at Shizuma.

“You look beautiful, Shizuma.” She said to her in admiration.

Her words made Shizuma return her smile before she brought her lips towards Nagisa’s in a quick kiss. When the two parted, Nagisa wrapped her arms around Shizuma and kissed her again, this time with a bit more passion. No matter how many times they’ve done it, kissing always made Nagisa feel alive. Having the need for air, they reluctantly ended their kiss.

“As much as I would love to continue, my dear Nagisa-chan,” Shizuma finally said, a little breathless. “If we don’t hurry to the beach, Hikari-san and Amane-san will start to wonder where we are.”

Nagisa nodded and the two of them slipped on their sandals, grabbed their beach bags, and walked out of their apartment hand-in-hand for their double date with their friends Hikari and Amane.

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Re: Strawberry Panic: Bikini Time (oneshot)

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:20 pm

Cute little one-shot, Sulli. :) When Shizuma's beauty is being described in perfect detail, the readers start feeling like Nagisa. XD I think I'd stutter a tad less.

Nice introduction into our yuri fanfiction forum, thanks! Shizuma Nagisa

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Re: Strawberry Panic: Bikini Time (oneshot)

Post by SulliMike23 on Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:42 pm

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:Cute little one-shot, Sulli. :) When Shizuma's beauty is being described in perfect detail, the readers start feeling like Nagisa. XD I think I'd stutter a tad less.

Nice introduction into our yuri fanfiction forum, thanks! Shizuma Nagisa
When one describes beauty, they have to be very accurate. IMO, Shizuma is a very beautiful young lady, probably more beautiful that most of the other SP characters.

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Re: Strawberry Panic: Bikini Time (oneshot)

Post by Luu Sky Sapphire on Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:07 pm

Very true. :) Probably, Shizuma is a goddess, but I'm quite fond of the little ray of light named Hikari. Pun intended. Hikari

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Re: Strawberry Panic: Bikini Time (oneshot)

Post by SulliMike23 on Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:22 pm

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:Very true. :) Probably, Shizuma is a goddess, but I'm quite fond of the little ray of light named Hikari. Pun intended. Hikari
Well she is cute, it's hard not to like her.

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Re: Strawberry Panic: Bikini Time (oneshot)

Post by Chaglette on Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:56 pm

Love the description for Shizuma XD I could just see her as a goddess right now <3

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Re: Strawberry Panic: Bikini Time (oneshot)

Post by SulliMike23 on Fri Jul 08, 2011 1:29 pm

Chie-sama wrote:Love the description for Shizuma XD I could just see her as a goddess right now <3
Exactly what I was aiming for.

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